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From Birth To DirtThe doctor’s hand snatches you from the womb Thus beginning the journey towards your tomb We are taken too soon from this heavenly bliss Born into a cruel and a twisted world like this Born into a life that’s full of evil and sinners Destined to be a loser never one of the winners We are born so that a later stage we can then die God is twisted he takes pleasure in seeing us cry If you were never born you’d never have to feel any pain You wouldn’t know that after the sunshine there is rain Some only find joy when the alter their perception However, drugs are another one of lifeFrom Birth To Dirt
in Open on 1/8/07
Drug Induced Peace Of MindIt’s seems like to much effort for me to meditate It’s much quicker for me just to self medicate Self medicate to feel something other than a cold chill Smoke something, drink some alcohol, take some pillDrug Induced Peace Of Mind
But my medicated peace of mind don’t come easy Some of the strange concoctions make me queasy But I quickly take what’s being served
To numb all my pain that’s underserved
Today my smile is sponsored by Prozac That has gotten the monkey off my back Sure to you it seems happiness that’s fake But without it I wouldn’t bother to even wake
I just like t
in Fixed on 10/9/06
The I In DieI feel as though I have nothing left to live for I want to lay in the fetus position on the floor Just lay still until the body and soul loses it’s will Lay waiting until the blood in my veins begins to chillThe I In Die
I wait patiently as death slowly creeps in I die only to be asked to repent all my sin I curse whatever god chose only pain to bring I crash land hard in hell but I don’t feel a thing
For some the truth will be hard and bitter to swallow With my demise I hope my friends don’t wallow or follow My remains to a grave I don’t want you to bring I wish to have no c
in Fixed on 10/9/06
What Makes A Friend?Well I had a friend tell me today That I had changed in some way She claimed I was blinded by lies She said I had a thing for brown eyesWhat Makes A Friend?
She said a girl possessed my heart And that’s when the changes did start I heard this story from someone else too They also claimed I’d changed cause of you
But why is it wrong for me to care? About the one with my life I share I sense jealousy behind your claim You I blame, have shame in your game
I might in your eyes changed for the worse But my unhappiness that was my curse Has be broken by a true pers
in Fixed on 9/13/06
Daily NeedsDevious Information
- Websitehttp://www.gerrydavisart.com
- Emailmootoyoutoo@gmail.com
- Current Age: 20
- Current Residence: Tipperary
- Interests: Poetry, Music, Drugs
- Favourite movie: LOTR, Fear and Loathing to name two
- Favourite band or musician: Nirvana, Kyuss, Alice in chains to name three
- Favourite genre of music: Grunge/Rock/Heavy Metal
- Operating System: XP
- MP3 player of choice: MP3 player is currently broke :(
- Shell of choice: My shell i hide in
- Skin of choice: clean skin
- Favourite game: Age of empires
- Favourite gaming platform: PS2
- Favourite cartoon character: Cartman, Stewie, Homer
- Personal Quote: I write what I dare not speak. I speak what I dare not write
- Tools of the Trade: brain
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Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?
Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?
It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift
but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.
[link]
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Feeling down or feeling great?
Tell us how you feel of late.
Inside is a great big ocean,
Of many people's *RawEm0tions!
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Rachael. <3
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!
1-3 you're a bad friend
4-6 you're an ok friend
7-9 you're a good friend
10-& Up you're a great friend
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"I believe that everything you do bad comes back to you. So everything that I do that's bad, I'm going to suffer for it. But in my heart, I believe what I'm doing is right. So I feel like I'm going to heaven." --Tupac Shakur
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Be welcome to visit my gallery: =Eileithyia and my band's site ThanatoSchizO!
.:. One day, life will bring you back into the light... .:.
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VOD
~BEn
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If I had a penny everytime that someone said
I was attractive...
Damn I would be poor.
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check out #manipulatorsworkshop in DAmn [link]
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NEW CONTEST:music
^^^contains great prizes and a bribe
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comfortably numb
Uberholt
Unspoken Burial
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Best Photomanipulation: Obscured
Best 3D Piece: Mansion
Best Vector: Logitech
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I only read a few lines of your poems but I had to stop. A lot of the rhymes I found were forced then ruined the rhythm. Try writing about something in your backyard, your bedroom, your kitchen and describe it as best you can. See what that produces.
Try a non rhyming poem for once.
If you do this and send me the link, I will definately tell you my honest opinion and help you improve.
I am currently studying literature and have done a course on poetry. Though I may not have the stuff to prove it in my gallery, I am a writer and I would love to see some better poems from you.
Please take this as constructive criticism as all writers need to improve.
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I don't squirm. I flail. Less restrictive, more expressive.
Btw, if you know of any french literature group (poems & prose), I am looking for some !
Ty. Will come back for reading
HAve a great day.
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"I'll tell you a little story called "The Ugly Barnacle": Once there was a very ugly barnacle. He was so ugly that everybody died. The End. "
My Galla [link]
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